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Post by Raku on Sept 24, 2007 16:31:13 GMT -5
.:. Die In My Arms.:.
Her heart pure, His heart corrupt. Her intentions true, His intentions lethal. Both met on a blood soaked field. Sword to sword, fire to water. Two majestic beasts soared above, Roaring and thrashing for the right to live. Her heart was pierced with a blood soaked dagger, His heart was broken. For when her helm dropped, His beloved's face was revealed.
Helm= a helmet from dragon times...
.:. Hearts of Tragedies.:.
Why do you hold her heart. Clenching it tightly, Under your control. One wrong move, It can be broken. One wrong doing, It can tear. Hold it lightly, Understanding your love. Let go of hatred, For it can taint it black. Blood rolls down your hands. After you left, Her heart was no more.
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Post by konoka on Sept 24, 2007 16:34:42 GMT -5
You sound heart broken! I like the first one. It's so true in times of battle. T_T
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Post by Shy on Sept 24, 2007 16:35:36 GMT -5
wow. ur really good! luv the poems. ^^
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Post by Raku on Sept 24, 2007 16:36:00 GMT -5
I do? I wrote these last year....After reading Eragon and Eldest. I just starting writing at school and *poems shimmer* Tada!
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Post by konoka on Sept 24, 2007 16:50:44 GMT -5
Lol. I used to write poems..but my friend said I sounded emo cause they were normally about lonely people and ending it all.. I had one I said it was nice, but the real meaning was that the girl killed herself because of the world around her being so cruel to her and then a fallen angel came to take her away. ^^ lol. I said to my teachers that she calmed the peace within her soul and welcomed herself to the world with his help. >.> <.< I'm a liar! lol.
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Post by Ransu on Sept 24, 2007 18:16:42 GMT -5
Very good *gives her a cookie*
lol mine are...what's a word for mine
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