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Post by Raku on Aug 7, 2007 23:08:33 GMT -5
Here is Chapter Three's preview. This was taken from the beginning of the chapter.
Raku slipped into the warm spring, her towl at its edge. The warm waters soothed her hand and tired muscles. A soft sigh escaped her vocals as she leaned against the spring's edge. Farther into the cave the blonde's eyes opened. He placed a hand on his head, "Where the hell am I?" His eyes held confusion, as he stood in pain. "Ow, what happened to me?! Wait...I hear something.." He thought to himself. The blonde walked unsteadily through the cave and down a long tunnel. He passed a alcove full of towels, unaware of where he was heading. His steps were silent, as he walked into a large cave opening. Warm air hit his pained skin, as he saw a spring ahead of him. He glanced around, seeing a towel at one edge. His eyes widened at the sight now before him. A scream came from Raku as she sntched the towl from the cave floor. She dragged it into the water, quickly wrapping it around her body. "What the hell are you doing?!" She yelled. Stepping out of the water, and tightly holding the towel around her wet form. The blonde turned and ran, screaming as he went. Raku chased after him, quickly running into the alcove first. Changing into a tight fitting pink bath robe, and then kept chasing. The blonde let out a terrified scream, as Raku tackled him to the ground.
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Post by Shy on Aug 7, 2007 23:15:43 GMT -5
lol. very good. cant wait to see wat raku has in store for him.
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Post by Raku on Aug 7, 2007 23:16:24 GMT -5
I have a few ideas....^^ Poor Deidara, curiosity got the best of him!!
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Post by Aster on Aug 8, 2007 9:01:59 GMT -5
LoL! cool!! i would so do that!
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Post by Raku on Aug 8, 2007 19:05:23 GMT -5
That is how I thought of it! I thought, "Hmmm...What would Deidara do?" And you see the outcome!
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Post by Shy on Aug 8, 2007 19:10:14 GMT -5
lol. cant wait till ya put the actual chap up. *gets all excited*
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Post by konoka on Sept 15, 2007 20:44:07 GMT -5
OMFG! I can see him running and screaming like a girl in my head and Raku all glaring and cussing at him! lmao! I'm rolling! Come on! More. lol. More!
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