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 If I cry...it's not your fault...it's his
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Name: Zhu Maruko (ZOMG haven't used this name in a while)

Age: 5 (He is an upcoming character that Vinny meets and trains sorta like the Zabuza-Haku thing.)

Gender: Male

Birthdate: Unknown at this point

Height: Average 5-year-old (About as tall as Gaara as a little Kid)

History: Not much is known about Zhu, but here's what we know.
Zhu is supposedly the heir to the House of Maruko. Zhu also bears the Mark of the 5 tailed Omen. His father died protecting the village from this mighty demon and sealed it within his only son. Zhu walks the streets of the Neos village in pain with nothing but his stuffed bear to keep him company. Zhu is also a loner and lives on the streets, fighting dogs and other stray animals for scraps just to survive. Nobody treats him kindly because of the mark on his back, which is visible to all. He has an unknown bloodline that was dubbed the Urutora. This is all that is known of the small Maruko kid.

Personality: Zhu is a very sad kid. His only real friend is a stuffed animal if that counts as "real." Zhu is not treated as he should as stated in his History. Zhu has not found a single soul who treated him like a person instead of the trash he is known as. He is a very lonely child who many people think should be killed. Many have made attempts to assassinate him but the demon inside stops them automatically. He has great potential and if given a chance, could become a great person.

Other: No

Special Abilities: His Urutora. This skill is the kekkai genkai of the Maruko clan. This is, like the Sharingan, is an occular Ninjutsu. It has the ability to give the possessor qualities of another, such as eye color, thoughts, signature jutsu, even other kekkai genkai if powerful enough. Although Zhu is still at a young age and even with the assisstance of his demon, his kekkai genkai is still untapped potential and even if he could use it now, it would most likely be a horrible image with as much skill as his current state. It is very unstable though and can drive the user into madness. When a member of the Maruko Clan dies, the Urutora is sealed away forever and cannot be taken from the dead corpse.
Zhu also is the host of the 5-tailed Omen. This demon is one of the older demons who is a very great benefit to Zhu's survival. The Omen carries a large amount of chakra with it that Zhu can use for survival. It always has helped Zhu when he was the target of Assassination.

Jutsu: None that are known yet.

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Gotta get in tune with Sailor Moon
'Cause the cartoon has got
the boom anime babes
That make me think the wrong thing
How can I help but think its funny when your mad?
Tryin hard not to smile though I feel bad
I'm the kinda guy who laughs at a funeral
Can't understand what I mean, you soon will
Have a tendency of wearing my mind on my sleeve
Have a history of losin my shirt
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« Reply #1 on Apr 1, 2008, 3:59pm »
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ok i understand that he is a kid and his Urutora can make him go insane if used to much due to it being unstable...
but the ability of anything copying other kekkai genkai is too strong. We already discussed this about a year ago. change that and its all good.
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« Reply #2 on Apr 1, 2008, 7:35pm »
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I said if powerful enough...he's still a young kid...so even if with his demon's power...It'd most likely kill him if not cause illness that would kill him pretty quickly.
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Gotta get in tune with Sailor Moon
'Cause the cartoon has got
the boom anime babes
That make me think the wrong thing
How can I help but think its funny when your mad?
Tryin hard not to smile though I feel bad
I'm the kinda guy who laughs at a funeral
Can't understand what I mean, you soon will
Have a tendency of wearing my mind on my sleeve
Have a history of losin my shirt
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 Re: If I cry...it's not your fault...it's his
« Reply #3 on Apr 1, 2008, 9:11pm »
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just change it...
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« Reply #4 on Apr 1, 2008, 9:25pm »
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I did...did you even reread it...I didn't do as you said...but still read it
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Gotta get in tune with Sailor Moon
'Cause the cartoon has got
the boom anime babes
That make me think the wrong thing
How can I help but think its funny when your mad?
Tryin hard not to smile though I feel bad
I'm the kinda guy who laughs at a funeral
Can't understand what I mean, you soon will
Have a tendency of wearing my mind on my sleeve
Have a history of losin my shirt
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 Re: If I cry...it's not your fault...it's his
« Reply #5 on Apr 1, 2008, 9:48pm »
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alright... i read it but only the part about the other kekkai genkai's. its good now i guess
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